The night when I couldn't sleep

We were learning to describe a time when we couldn't sleep.
Here is my writing.


My eyes were open wide but I was really tired. The clock was ticking,the wind was howling,crickets were chirping,my dad was snoring but worst of all the baby was crying all night. The worst bit was I was next door to the baby's room. He even started screaming how frustrating! "WAAH" "WAAH" the baby kept on crying and crying. It was so irritating I wondered will I get enough sleep? I covered my ears with my pillow but the baby's crying was so loud that I could still hear it.

Suddenly the crying stopped for a moment. My eyes were heavy, my eyes were slowly closing then... the crying started again. My eyes were red. I was getting so annoyed. I was so annoyed that I really wanted to say shut up!!! people need some sleep around here! that's how frustrated I was. The wind started howling again, the tree's were smashing onto the window but the baby was still crying so I thought to myself again will it ever stop?

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